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::The Storm and the Cave Facts
The story is a companion piece to "The Betrayal". Its
primary purpose was to fulfil a course requirement for my management
development training.
In 2002 I began a management development programme at work.
Creativity was encouraged, and "The Storm and the Cave" formed part of
my 'personal development plan'. In this context it may or may not
have been successful, but as a stand-alone piece of fiction it has worn
better than I expected.
The strengths of the story lie in the unforced reflective mood, and the
gentle narrative reversal at the end. More work would not make it a
better story, so I leave it as it is.
The storm had passed; small consolation to
Mirko as he lay on the beach. The waves which had dashed him from the
observation platform of Serendipity seemed an unimaginably distant
memory. But he was alive, and sooner or later, Catzendralle, with her
remarkable gifts, would work out where he was and bring the galley back
for him.
He raised himself unsteadily to his feet and looked around. Several
substantial pieces of wood lay on the beach; Mirko recognised them as
galley wreckage. Serendipity had managed to escape the storm, but it
looked as if at least one galley had been less lucky. The storms on the Aylissian coast were notorious; and Mirko wondered if this cove wasn’t
the infamous ‘Galleys’ Graveyard’.
Looking up the beach he saw to his left a thickly-clustered
wood or orchard stretching away, and to his right a gently-sloping
series of hills leading by imperceptible degrees to the mountains
blotting the horizon. The topography was familiar by reputation to every
mariner: this really was Galleys’ Graveyard, where the combination of
frequent storms and the prevailing wind inevitably forced galleys rash
enough to chance the weather.
Mirko wandered over to the orchard and plucked a mangri-fruit. At the
very least he would not starve, although for a fact his diet might soon
become monotonous.
After eating his fill an idea occurred to him. By popular
repute Galleys’ Graveyard was also the residence of the Augurant, a
wise-woman with the gift of prophecy. Mirko would normally have scoffed
at such a notion, but his recent experience with Catzendralle’s unusual
abilities had diluted his scepticism somewhat. In any event, he had
nothing better to do; he suspected it would be several days, at best,
before Serendipity could return.
The sunlight was beginning to fade by the time Mirko’s keen
eyes picked out the entrance to the cave almost concealed behind a
screen of foliage. Could there really be anyone inside? Regardless, it
looked it sheltered place to spend the night, and the air already hinted
at the sun-bereft chill to come.
Walking quietly, his heart pounding – after all, the cave
might be the lair not of some toothless crone but a wild beast – he
gently lifted the branches aside. In front of him he saw neither
crone nor beast, but a young woman with a cap of short dark curls, large
blue eyes and a composure no-one that age trapped in a cave had any
right to. Mirko took his hand away from his sword-hilt to indicate his
peaceable intentions. The woman smiled, beckoned him to sit down on a
rough seat carved from the rock.
Mirko gathered himself and asked: “Are you – the Augurant?”
The woman inclined her head with a half-smile. “Does that
surprise you?”
Mirko’s preconceptions of the Augurant had been conditioned
by the idea of an elderly woman of few personal charms, a point he felt
unequal to introducing into the conversation at such an early stage of
acquaintance.
“In no way,” he said. “You are the sole occupant of the
Augurant’s cave: it does not stretch my credulity to believe you hold
the post.”
The Augurant smiled again. “Since you are here, you may ask
such questions as you choose. I know you have been shipwrecked.”
Mirko was impressed. “Remarkable!”
“Not really: your state of attire – and the seaweed
in your hair -- leads to no other conclusion. I need no supernatural
powers here.”
The interview was not going the way Mirko had expected.
Oracles were meant to be wizened, cryptic, ineffable. The woman in front
of him manifested none of these qualities – especially the ‘wizened’.
“Before we begin the consultation, may I ask your name; and
how many questions I can ask?”
“My name is Jalen,” she said with a smile, “and I am not some
cheap fairground fortune-teller. We have all night; ask as many
questions as you choose.”
Mirko paused for a moment. “With such a broad canvas I hardly
know where to begin.”
Jalen leant back against the wall of the cave, negligently
casting another stick on the fire she had set against the chill. “Let’s
make it easy for me,” she said. “You tell me about yourself; we’ll take
it from there.”
“Don’t you already know? You’re the Augurant.”
Jalen frowned. “There’s a difference between an oracle and a
bloody mind-reader,” she said. “The more you tell me, the more I can
help you. Why don’t you tell me how you got here?”
Mirko stood up and began to pace the cave. “There’s not a lot
to tell,” he said. “My name is Mirko Ascalon. I started out as
galley-captain in Garganet; a small vessel but I was good at it. My
galley was involved in a naval engagement in the Northern Reaches: my
manoeuvres were unorthodox and I was court-martialled and exiled. I
can’t go back to Garganet, and I can’t say I really want to.”
Jalen nodded. “How did you feel about that? Having to leave
your home and your profession?”
“At the time,” said Mirko, “I felt angry and hurt. But if it
hadn’t happened, everything that’s followed wouldn’t have happened
either; so I would have been a different person, and since I’m happy
with who I am now…well, maybe it was for the best.”
Jalen stretched in cat-like motion. “So where did you end
up?”
“I went to Paladria,” said Mirko, checking a grin at some of
the images that came back to him. “In Paladria there are only two things
they care about: galley-racing and political intrigue. I was involved in
both: I skippered a galley for the biggest political intriguer of all.
My galley won when it mattered; and my paymaster won the Election. I had
no reason at all to be dissatisfied.”
Jalen walked over to the fire, began to toast a mangri-fruit
on the end of a stick. “Why do I get the impression you were
dissatisfied?”
Mirko smiled ruefully. “I came to realise there was more to
life than galley-racing: indeed, that it was essentially trivial. My
paymaster, Bartazan, was noticeably warped and corrupt in a city where
those qualities rarely stand out. And by winning with his galley I
effectively won him the election. The same night he tried to kill me,
which tells you the kind of man he is. I began to find my values at
variance with my conduct.”
Mirko forbore to mention that he had not been entirely
guiltless in the affair, having been involved in several levels of
duplicity himself.
“So you ended up here?” asked Jalen, passing across half of
the toasted mangri-fruit.
Mirko nodded. “And I’d come to realise that galley-racing was not that
important. I’d spent twenty years becoming very good at it – and you’ll
have to take my word for it, I really am good – and I wasn’t sure how
I’d got there. I had spent my time in Garganet moving up through the
ranks until I commanded my own galley, like a hundred other officers;
and then in Paladria I fell straight into galley-racing. What I was
doing was determined by other people’s expectations of me.”
Jalen looked off into space. “That’s how things tend to work.
We show an aptitude for something, people notice it, push us in that
direction. How do you think I got where I am?”
Mirko frowned. He had hardly imagined the idea of an Augurant
having a career path. Augurants just were, surely? But perhaps she was
right. Whatever people ended up doing was the result of the choices they
made, although sometimes those choices were passive ones.
“What are you thinking?” asked Jalen.
Mirko smiled. “Nothing. When I was in Paladria I found there
were other things I was good at. Nothing is what it seems there, you can
never know who to trust or what to believe. I became adept at navigating
my way through that, knowing when to run, fight, bluff. I can do more
than just race galleys – but everything I seem to do pushes me further
into it. What else could I do if I only let myself?”
“It doesn’t have to be that difficult,” said Jalen. “You can
always do something else. Walk away from the galleys if you like.
No-one’s stopping you.”
Mirko smiled. “I need to live. One of the perquisites of the
galley-master’s life is a sizeable retainer and a share of prize money.”
“The Garganets always have a reputation for a certain
mercenary quality…”
“It isn’t quite that simple,” said Mirko with a hint of
asperity. “It would be marvellous to say ‘I’m not going to worry about
money, I’ll just live in a cave off toasted fruit and be Augurant.’ But
my family has estates in Garganet which are heavily encumbered. It’s my
responsibility to one day have enough money to redeem those estates. The
only way I can make that sort of money is on the galleys.”
“Only you can decide what you want to do,” said Jalen. “If
commanding a certain level of income is important to you, then you need
to stay involved with the galleys. That doesn’t mean you can’t try other
things too. If they work out and prove more lucrative than you expect,
you can do them instead: if not, you can keep them as interests. There
isn’t a simple, straightforward answer which allows you to have
everything.”
Mirko smiled dryly. “I never really thought there was. Can
you hear something?” A rustling sound outside was becoming distinctly
more audible.
“Anyone in there?” came a rough call from outside. Mirko’s
hand went to his sword. Jalen shook her head.
“Who is it?” she called.
A man in light black armour covered with a rich red cloak
swept back the branches to block the exit to the cave. Behind him stood
at least three more in like attire. Mirko knew if it came to fighting
they didn’t stand a chance. Perhaps, he thought with wild irony, they
had come for counsel from the Augurant.
But the first man dropped to one knee and offered his sword
to Jalen.
“My lady!” he said. “I am yours to command!”
“Charistes!” she exclaimed. “You have come from my father?”
Charistes rose to his feet. “I have my lady, with a galley to
take you home.”
“He has won, then?”
Breaking into a grin, Charistes said: “Indeed he has, my
lady. Once again he is Prince of South Estria, and Falto hangs high over
the town, stretched to a length of nine feet.”
Jalen shrugged. “He brought about his own fate; not to mention marooning
me here. But I knew you’d be back for me.”
Mirko scratched his chin. “Your progression to Augurant
appears to have come via an unorthodox route.”
Jalen laughed. “Augurant! I never claimed to be Augurant…you
made the assumption because I was in the cave – but no-one’s lived here
for centuries. I was dumped here by my cousin Duke Falto, who had
usurped my father. Order is now restored, as it always is; and my
father’s men have come to take me home. You are welcome to come with
us.”
Mirko looked around at Charistes and his men, still smirking at the idea
that he had thought Duchess Jalen to be the Augurant. If he went with
them, he’d end up skippering an Estrian galley; and after his
consultation with ‘the Augurant’ he wasn’t sure that was what he wanted
to do. Besides, Catzendralle would never find him if he decamped to
Estria.
With a slight bow he said: “No thank you, my lady. I have my
own rescue to await; and my own destiny to follow.”
Jalen stepped towards him and kissed him gently on the cheek.
Looking into his eyes she said: “Goodbye, Captain. I can’t tell you what
to do, and I wouldn’t if I could – but you know in your heart the way
forward.”
“Thank you for your advice tonight,” he said with a smile.
“You would have made a good Augurant if Duke Falto had prospered.”
“I didn’t give you any advice,” she said. “I just listened.
The conclusions were your own.” And she stepped gracefully from the cave
with her retainers in tow.
Two days later Serendipity beached on the shore. Catzendralle and Damiano vaulted to the sand, looked around. Mirko
called out and with a wave of his arm and slowly walked towards them.
“I knew you’d find me,” he said, embracing Catzendralle. “But
you were faster than I expected.”
“What’s the point of being a clairvoyant if you don’t use
it?” she asked. “I hope you’ve spent your time wisely.”
“Do you know,” said Mirko, “I rather think I have. Things are
going to be somewhat different from now on.”
THE END